[原创]小弟现在初三，大家评评这篇小文！

KingTiger

<span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';"><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 147.75pt;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">飞的梦想</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 22pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">望着窗外的天</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">阴暗</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">昏沉</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">飘着小雨的情景</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">脆弱的坚强</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">掩饰不了内心的恐惧</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">无奈与痛苦</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">疲惫地合上无神的双眼</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">想逃避却怎么也睡不着</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">雨在窗外飞扬</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">心却无力再欣赏</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">何时才有一片天空</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">留给自己</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">飞翔</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">风还在呼啸</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">却怎么也吹不干</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">少年心中的泪</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">梦想着有那么一天</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">可以迎接温暖的阳光</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; FONT-FAMILY: 华文新魏; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-ascii-font-family: 'Times New Roman';">与翼天使一起飞翔</span><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p></p></span></p><p class="MsoNormal" style="MARGIN: 0cm 0cm 0pt; TEXT-INDENT: 126pt; mso-char-indent-count: 9.0;"><span lang="EN-US" style="FONT-SIZE: 14pt; mso-bidi-font-size: 12.0pt; mso-fareast-font-family: 华文新魏;"><p><font face="Times New Roman">&nbsp;</font></p></span></p><p>&nbsp;</p></span>&nbsp;

KingTiger

自己先<strong><em><u>顶！</u></em></strong>

定安

少年不知愁滋味。。。。。。。

花弄影

<strong>初三？还不错</strong>

花弄影

想当初俺也爱写写小诗小词

sniperhere

后现代派~~~

KingTiger

<p>恩恩，这个知道～</p><p>这篇小文只不过是随感而发</p><p>形散神不聚</p>